Carrier of Death
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Carrier of Death
This one is a little all over the place. I was having organizational problems haha. I love stanza two <3 But not fond of the second to last one :/
And in case you couldn't guess (though I think you could ) it's Blood.
And in case you couldn't guess (though I think you could ) it's Blood.
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At first I was like "...blue tubes?" but then I got it as I read further.
I like it. 8D
I like it. 8D
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Ohhh. I like the title. xD At first it made me think of that one Inkpop book getting published, The Carrier of the Mark.
It's good. c:
And I'm so glad you're doing the challenge with me. ^^
It's good. c:
And I'm so glad you're doing the challenge with me. ^^
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Thanks
Oh haha. I was going to title it The Angry Red Monster, but that seemed like a bit much so I didn't
Yay! I'm so glad I'm doing the challenge too! I come home and like start right away. Makes my day (that's rhymed...I'm still in poem mode )
Oh haha. I was going to title it The Angry Red Monster, but that seemed like a bit much so I didn't
Yay! I'm so glad I'm doing the challenge too! I come home and like start right away. Makes my day (that's rhymed...I'm still in poem mode )
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Ahaha, The Angry Red Monster. I love that. xD It sounds so cute and terrifying all at once.
..I can't rhyme to save a... mime.
SURE. That works. xP
..I can't rhyme to save a... mime.
SURE. That works. xP
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I love rhyming. Nearly all mine rhyme in some way. I don't know why but there's just something about the rhythm and rhyming words and I like to write
Though if I am going to write a poem about my feelings, normally it won't rhyme
Though if I am going to write a poem about my feelings, normally it won't rhyme
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RHYME LIKE A MIME, STARREH.
I write in half free-verse and half-rhyming. Like... If I can rhyme, I'd rather do that than not rhyme, you know? But sometimes free-verse just works better.
I write in half free-verse and half-rhyming. Like... If I can rhyme, I'd rather do that than not rhyme, you know? But sometimes free-verse just works better.
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Yeah it sort of depends on the topic. I rhyme as often as I can but it's not the end of the world when i can't because I like free verse too. I'm sure when i get down to some of the harder topics I'll free verse them. I think rhyming can be harder but I like it
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