Hands of Time
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Hands of Time
Kind of wanted to practice with metaphor a bit, but... I dunno if this metaphor is really metaphor...y metaphor, so. xP But I kinda like it.
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The clocks,
They mock us
They say one cannot control time
Yet they hold it in their hands
Every tick, a second closer
To the end
Time heals us
It mends the broken
And melts the frozen hearts
We have no control over time
All we can do is wait it out
While the clocks just tick away
Putting their power into play
Without the clocks,
Does time exist?
Or are we stuck
In never-ending bliss?
Ignorance is what it is
Without time, we can’t keep track
Then we’ll lose these moments,
And never get them back
So beware the clocks
The masters of time
They’re numbering your days
And numbering mine
They mock us
They say one cannot control time
Yet they hold it in their hands
Every tick, a second closer
To the end
Time heals us
It mends the broken
And melts the frozen hearts
We have no control over time
All we can do is wait it out
While the clocks just tick away
Putting their power into play
Without the clocks,
Does time exist?
Or are we stuck
In never-ending bliss?
Ignorance is what it is
Without time, we can’t keep track
Then we’ll lose these moments,
And never get them back
So beware the clocks
The masters of time
They’re numbering your days
And numbering mine
Holleh- Dang, this user has a lot of posts....
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Thank you. (:
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realllllllllllllly like this! (:
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Wow, thanks, everyone. :3
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I know this is a double post, buuut...
So my school has this literary magazine thing, and for English class, we can submit two pieces to the magazine for up to fifteen bonus points.
I was kind of thinking about submitting this poem... I get the points just for submitting it, but I kind of want it to make it to the actual magazine if I do submit it. xP SO WHAT DO YOU GUYS THINK? Should I submit it?
So my school has this literary magazine thing, and for English class, we can submit two pieces to the magazine for up to fifteen bonus points.
I was kind of thinking about submitting this poem... I get the points just for submitting it, but I kind of want it to make it to the actual magazine if I do submit it. xP SO WHAT DO YOU GUYS THINK? Should I submit it?
Holleh- Dang, this user has a lot of posts....
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