A Knock on Your Door

It's supposed to be one a day, not sure if that means you can't write more than one......but it's thirty minutes to midnight and I couldn't resist
I'm pleased with this one. It was hard, and I used a different rhyming scheme. Anyways, I put quotes in, I wasn't sure if I needed them but since the narrator changes, I went ahead and just added it. This one is Death.

Ohhhh, I really like this one. c:
Like... a lot. xD
I like how you literally took death knocking on your door and then what he said. I don't have any critique for this. c:

Thanks! I'm glad it's good It was hard to get in the groove of.
I think it's because I tried Innocence first and failed....all I can think of are nursery rhymes lol.

Niiiiiice poem. The rhymes are dead on the money. And its the perfect length. Not too short nor to long. Niiiiiice.