you still end up dead **
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you still end up dead **
by xStarr_x3 Tue Mar 01, 2011 11:43 pm
A B O R T I O N
One word. Eight letters.
Two______________sides.
One word. Eight letters.
Two______________sides.
_____Say ‘no’ to abortion;
__________Say ‘yes’ to unwinding.
________________________________________________________We fought a war for this.
U N W I N D I N G
One word. Nine letters.
It’s not death. You’re still alive.
One word. Nine letters.
It’s not death. You’re still alive.
_____Say ‘no’ to abortion;
_________Say ‘yes’ to unwinding.
________________________________________________________This is our solution to that war.
_______________________________________Disagree or Agree?
_______________________________________________It doesn’t matter.
_________________________________________________________Not to us.
_______________________________We decided to take the
______________________________________________________P
______________________________________________________L
______________________________________________________U
______________________________________________________N
______________________________________________________G
______________________________________________________E
______________________________________________________D
______________________________________________________O
______________________________________________________W
______________________________________________________N
_________________________________________________________________________And we’re already falling;
_____________________________________________________________________Already about to hit the ground.
_______________________U N W I N D I N G
________________________________________or
____________________________________________A B O R T I O N
____________________________________________________________________________Two words.
____________________________________________________________________________Seventeen letters.
____________________________________________________________________________One civil war.
____________________________________________________________________________One divided country.
And it still ends in
_______________________________________________________D E A T H.---------------------------------
'Twas my English outside reading project.
Based on the book "Unwind" by Neal Shusterman.
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Re: you still end up dead **
by BPahl88 Wed Mar 02, 2011 12:14 am
Huh. Intersting. I don't know why, but this seems impowering. Well, I suppose I know why. Because it just is. Very nice poem, but... are those lines on purpose or is it because the forum won't let you shift the letters?
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Re: you still end up dead **
by xStarr_x3 Wed Mar 02, 2011 12:43 am
Ahah, 'it just is'. Great reason there. xP
...The lines are because the forum won't shift the stuff, so I put in underscores to get everything where I need it. >.>;;
Usually I'll turn them white, but it's already pretty time consuming, so I left them black.
...The lines are because the forum won't shift the stuff, so I put in underscores to get everything where I need it. >.>;;
Usually I'll turn them white, but it's already pretty time consuming, so I left them black.
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Re: you still end up dead **
by BPahl88 Wed Mar 02, 2011 12:51 am
Yeah. But it just is. Period.
I thought as much.
I thought as much.
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Re: you still end up dead **
by Hazel Wed Mar 09, 2011 8:51 am
This is a heavy topic, I commend you on it. I liked it though, it had a good meaning. And I agree with BP, it does sound empowering 
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Re: you still end up dead **
by xStarr_x3 Wed Mar 09, 2011 10:43 pm
Thank youuu. (:
ALSO
I fixed a formatting error near the beginning. *:
ALSO
I fixed a formatting error near the beginning. *:
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