He's Coming for You
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He's Coming for You
by Hazel Wed Mar 09, 2011 8:53 am
I liked the idea for this one, but I think I executed it poorly seeing it's not scary and it's supposed to be fear. Oh well 
Yeah....I might do two on fear since I already wrote one on dreams and colors a long time ago
Anywho, thoughts?
Yeah....I might do two on fear since I already wrote one on dreams and colors a long time ago
Anywho, thoughts?Last edited by Hazel on Thu Jun 16, 2011 7:16 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Re: He's Coming for You
by xStarr_x3 Wed Mar 09, 2011 9:57 pm
xD The only stanza I'm not fond of is the one where you're like "Doomed I am now". It just threw off the flow.
but otherwise, good. Not scary, like you said. But good. xP
but otherwise, good. Not scary, like you said. But good. xP
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