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Post by Holleh Mon Mar 14, 2011 11:28 pm

Soo... Yeah. This is more of a song, as indicated by the repeated stanzas. I kind of had the song in my head the other night, but of course, as always, when I got to writing it, it didn't come quite right. Oh well. It's pretty self-explanatory, so... Here ya go.

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Nothing is quite the same
And there is no one to blame
I just wish we had another chance
To make it right and set things straight

We’re supposed to love
And all we do is hate
I wish we had every moment back
But now I think it’s too late

One day I will be able to breathe
And honestly tell you I’m okay
But that day is not today
That day is not today

Everything is never as it seems
Broke hearts and broken dreams
Restless nights with no goodbye
Empty promises, we wonder why

Things will never be the same
And I’m the one to blame
I wish we could make it right
Turn back the time, give up the fight

One day I will be able to breathe
And honestly tell you I’m okay
But that day is not today
That day is not today

All this time
And still no reason why
Give it up
Just leave me now
I’ll breathe again
Because in the end
It’s not worth it
For someone who doesn’t care

So I will breathe
And I will believe
I tried it once
But I was too naïve
I want to believe
And wear my heart on my sleeve
But for now
It’s just not enough
I’m tired of being strong
When you just won’t hang on
I will be okay
Just not today

One day I will be able to breathe
And honestly tell you I’m okay
But that day is not today
That day is not today

One day I will breathe again
Tell you I’m okay again
One day I will see again
I will learn to be free again

But that day is not today
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Post by bibbit Tue Mar 15, 2011 12:12 am

My only problem with it is that a few of the lines seem a little cliche. But other than that, great. 9/10

Rating if I think about how it sounds like a Nickelback song: 2/10

xP kidding
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Post by Holleh Tue Mar 15, 2011 12:13 am

I don't even listen to Nickelback.

But thanks.
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