Off the top of my head

So.... One morning I wake up because of a nightmare and wonder, did this really happen or was I imagining it I wasnt sure. I think to myself, it felt so real and I didnt know, how could this be. So the first thing I do is try to call one of the people in my nightmare, and no answer, so that made me worry even more. There was no way it was real, Somebdoy help me. PLEASE!!!! I hear in my head, im here. Whats going on? (I think to myself) I look around and no one is there. I now get up and leave my room and no one is home, now im really confusedd. All I hear are phones ringing. I dont understand. I say again HELP ME. PLEASE!!!! I hear nothing. I grab my keys and wallet and out the door I go. I think to myself where is everyone and why hasnt anyone called me, whats going on. I reapeat MOM, DAD, ANYONE, and still nothing. What do I do next, I cant even think straight and dont know where anyone is. HELP!!!!! Then I realize that my dream has come to real life, that the people are going to pop out of nowhere, I just dont know when and that it is going to happen again. I dont want to be here. I scream NOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SOMEONE JUST HELP!!!!!! Nothing happens. Then I see a shadow out of the corner of my eye, so I follow it. "Hello" I scream!?!? What is going on, and a voice says just wait a moment and you will see. I am scared now.

That's pretty interesting, also a bit creepy.
I noticed a bit of punctuation errors, you had a few run on sentences. Also adding !?!?! after "I scream" made it sound like she shouted that part as well, which I don't think was intentional. A few changes in tense as well. That's always something to look out for.
Out of curiosity, do the colors mean anything?

Red: thoughts in my head.
Orange: scared
and thanks hazel, and yeah the ?!?!?! was not intentional, did it by accident. Thanks )

Ok I sort of sensed some sort of theme with the color which was why I asked. It's a cool idea
No problem

Thanks )