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Post by Sofie Sat May 10, 2008 5:22 pm

Boredom Teaches
by Seth Wreckage

I am betting that I will be fine
Boredom taught me how to draw a line
I am waiting for the earth to cry
Boredom taught me how to wonder why

I am trying hard to rise above
Boredom taught me happy songs ate love
I am sure that I will be your friend
Boredom taught me this is not the end

I am running for denial now
Boredom taught me what and when and how
I am sick of war and fights and strife
Boredom taught me how to take a life





Because I am, as allways, bored. And I am, as allways, in the mood to be just a wee bit disturbing while still friendly.
This was inspired by a) A typo b) A movie that's got nothing to do with it and c) The image of an institution- For some odd reason.
CC me, please! Very Happy
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Post by Hazel Sat May 10, 2008 5:51 pm

Hehehe, great poem. I feel like I am always bored too. bounce
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Post by BlackOpal Sat May 10, 2008 6:32 pm

Oooh, pretty sounding.
The rhythm is perfect!
This is good and very thought-provoking. Or, somewhat thought-provoking. Or something along those lines.
You get the idea.
Awesome.
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Post by Moonlite Knight Thu May 15, 2008 11:13 pm

I agree, it's great! It makes you think, and it's true. Awesome!
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