Holy War

Just a little ditty on making one's mind up about religion. And so much more.
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The battle in my head
destroys its walls
and burns its refuge.
I am left
naked and alone
to the mercy of
unforgiving ideals
and blasphemous
beliefs that fight
over the prize of one
beautiful, helpless,
powerful thought to
add to a collection of
greater ones.
Armies are being built
and nothing induces lust
like an open mind.

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Crit?

This is really good and thought provoking. Great!!

I agree with Hazel. That poem really makes you think. I loved it! It's great!

That's great! I also agree, it does make you think.