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Post by Hazel Mon May 26, 2008 7:14 pm

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Last edited by Hazel on Wed Jul 22, 2009 5:50 am; edited 2 times in total
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Post by Moonlite Knight Mon May 26, 2008 7:46 pm

Wow, that was really good! I liked it. My only critic is that in the second to last line,m you might have mispelled "mey" is it supposed to be "may"?And this part "so to live forever" is kind of confusing.

But, besides that I really loved this poem, espically the last stanza! Great job! And I guess cleaning your room s actually helpful. I should clean mine someday soon Very Happy
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Post by Hazel Mon May 26, 2008 7:49 pm

There we go...those were a few typos, all fixed. Thanks for pointing them out to me...and i'm glad u liked it.... Very Happy And i guess i should clean my room more often who knows what else i'd find.. Razz
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Post by Broken Heart Tue May 27, 2008 12:12 pm

Awesome poem!!!
There is never an end for those like us
I loved this line =]
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Post by jeberexa Tue May 27, 2008 4:24 pm

Nice poem! I really love when people write mysterious poems like that...ones that just make you think and wonder... Smile
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Post by Darklady Sat May 31, 2008 7:51 pm

Yes. Kinda makes me think of my immortality. Jk wahahhaa!


Its a great poem. Smile

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Post by BPahl88 Mon Jun 23, 2008 3:34 am

Great poem. Very deep. Very Happy
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