Doubt
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Doubt
by Moonlite Knight Thu May 29, 2008 1:21 am
I dream
In the shadows.
I hide
In the light.
I grow
In the darkness.
I die
Instead of fight.
I’m so many things,
Yet nothing at all.
Unless you keep heart,
I shall never fall.
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I wrote this poem while taking a break from Math homewrok. Please tell me what yo uthink, thanks!
In the shadows.
I hide
In the light.
I grow
In the darkness.
I die
Instead of fight.
I’m so many things,
Yet nothing at all.
Unless you keep heart,
I shall never fall.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
I wrote this poem while taking a break from Math homewrok. Please tell me what yo uthink, thanks!
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Re: Doubt
by BlackOpal Thu May 29, 2008 11:19 am
Ooh, great job!
I really like it.
I LOVE the first two lines.
Fantastic.
I really like it.
I LOVE the first two lines.
Fantastic.
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Re: Doubt
by BPahl88 Thu Jun 26, 2008 8:57 pm
Very well writen! This is one of those poems that is short, but has a lot of meaning to it.
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