Bleeding Out
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Bleeding Out
Im Bleeding Out
the wound wont stop
blood is everywhere
Im bleeding out
Im bleeding out
its getting worse
No bandage can contain it
and yet
there is no blood
no wound
no pain
but I can feel it
I can feel all of it
I can feel every inch of it
I can see the blood
I can see the wound
Its on the inside
Of me
Why?
I dont know
But Im bleeding
Im bleeding out
Im digging deeper
deeper
Reaching deeper in
Get to the center
Until
Until it finally stops
I'm bleeding
Im bleeding out
Im digging
Im digging deeper
Im bleeding out
Digging deeper
Im facing myself
My wound is myself
And as I face myself
My wound stops bleeding
And eventually
I grow
I change
And I heal
the wound wont stop
blood is everywhere
Im bleeding out
Im bleeding out
its getting worse
No bandage can contain it
and yet
there is no blood
no wound
no pain
but I can feel it
I can feel all of it
I can feel every inch of it
I can see the blood
I can see the wound
Its on the inside
Of me
Why?
I dont know
But Im bleeding
Im bleeding out
Im digging deeper
deeper
Reaching deeper in
Get to the center
Until
Until it finally stops
I'm bleeding
Im bleeding out
Im digging
Im digging deeper
Im bleeding out
Digging deeper
Im facing myself
My wound is myself
And as I face myself
My wound stops bleeding
And eventually
I grow
I change
And I heal
OliviaLuna- Learning Writer
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Re: Bleeding Out
That was I neat poem. (Even though I will admit I am sqrumish when it comes to blood. Ick...)
Re: Bleeding Out
YA that was a really good poem! I like the last stanza as well. It was really good and it was very deep. It reminds me of the one song Bleeding Out by um Linkin Park! Oh and it does remind me of Bleeding Love too.
Re: Bleeding Out
That was nice. Reminds me of something that happened to me.
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