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Post by Moonlite Knight Mon Jun 16, 2008 2:18 am

Its easy to forget,
To push it out of mind,
To think we’ve never met,
To cut the ties that bind.

I lie in a corner
And wait for you to see
Past that small sad loner
And that girl who is me.

It’s easy to forget
And hard to remember.
Is that the way life’s set?
Must we fade, like embers?

But now I vow to you,
You won’t be forgotten
Now or anytime soon.

For as long as I breathe
I’ll remember you.
~ Like a Star @ heaven ~ Like a Star @ heaven ~ Like a Star @ heaven ~ Like a Star @ heaven ~ Like a Star @ heaven ~ Like a Star @ heaven ~ Like a Star @ heaven ~ Like a Star @ heaven ~ Like a Star @ heaven ~ Like a Star @ heaven ~ Like a Star @ heaven ~ Like a Star @ heaven ~ Like a Star @ heaven ~
Please tell me what you think, thanks Like a Star @ heaven
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Post by Hazel Mon Jun 16, 2008 2:24 am

Super! That was great! It's true too, and I like rhyming like that too Very Happy
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Post by xStarr_x3 Mon Jun 16, 2008 1:06 pm

That was great! I liked the rhyming scheme, as well.
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Post by jeberexa Mon Jun 16, 2008 4:19 pm

I liked it. Very good rhyming. 9/10. Smile
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Post by BPahl88 Mon Jun 16, 2008 11:35 pm

Awsome! It was short and sweet. Very Happy
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Post by Moonlite Knight Tue Jun 17, 2008 12:27 am

Thank you everyone Very Happy
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