Sunset

With all kinds of colors
From orange to yellow and red
With a sight so spectacular
It is one not to dread.

Sitting on the horizon
As beautiful as can be.
Oh how a sunset is great
A magnificent thing to see.

As it gets lower
I don’t like it at all.
I shout and cry, “Don’t go quite yet!”
I have loved what I have just saw.

But in my mind I knew it must go.
Even though I like this so much.
With the heavenly sight I love to watch
I seem to want to touch.

But now it’s gone away from my thoughts.
I try to let down the sorrow.
And now as I sit in the dark
I can’t wait until tomorrow.

Please critic.

Yes very true! I loved the last stanza the best!

this is a really nice poem BPahl88.

Awesome poem! I loved the last part the most

Thanx guys. And I just noticed that I posted the poem on 9:11. Something like this always happend to me. It's wierd.

AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved it BP