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Post by Dark Princess Fri Jul 04, 2008 11:37 pm

Life and Death

Scarred be the world
Death comes to us all
Whether we like or not

Shards of glass
Shine gently in the light
Take thee's light, take thee's shine

Thy can't live
Without light
Thy can't have death
Without darkness

So how do you live
But die all the same?
Die but live?
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Post by Hazel Sat Jul 05, 2008 5:15 am

Great poem! Very Happy I really like the first stanza.
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Post by Moonlite Knight Sat Jul 05, 2008 7:06 am

Wow, that was a really good poem! I agree, the first stanza was the best! Very Happy
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Post by Dark Princess Mon Jul 07, 2008 5:23 pm

Thanks
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Post by Broken Heart Mon Jul 07, 2008 5:50 pm

Awesome poem!!
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Post by xStarr_x3 Mon Jul 07, 2008 9:55 pm

That was amazing. I don't really think I got the message in it, but I still like it.
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Post by Dark Princess Tue Jul 08, 2008 1:43 am

I was bored when I wrote this so I really dont know what it's supposed to mean either.
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Post by GoMulchGo Thu Jul 10, 2008 6:34 am

Hmm.... I understand the why you call it a weird poem. And I agree, it's not very interpretable.
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