Re: Count to 50 before anyone but the Admins/Mods post~!

by **HS7** Sat Jul 11, 2009 12:09 am

83

Oops...

Giving up will never allow you to achieve anything in life. It's like a dream you have but you just let it go because you can't believe it.

by **Hazel** Sat Jul 11, 2009 12:12 am

uh you mea 82?

83

by **HS7** Sat Jul 11, 2009 12:13 am

85

No.

If you look at the last page, 78 is repeated.

by **Hazel** Sat Jul 11, 2009 12:14 am

ohhhh ok

86

by **HS7** Sat Jul 11, 2009 12:15 am

87

Yeah.

I have to go now.

Bye.

by **Hazel** Sat Jul 11, 2009 12:15 am

88

ok well I really really hope you come back

byebye Crying or Very sad

by **HS7** Sat Jul 11, 2009 12:17 am

889

Me too...

Bye...

by **Hazel** Sat Jul 11, 2009 12:17 am

90

bye

by **HS7** Sat Jul 11, 2009 12:17 am

by **Hazel** Sat Jul 11, 2009 12:18 am

by **Holleh** Sat Jul 11, 2009 5:30 am

Zero.

Wow, you guys got far.
And I ruined it.
I'm so evil. ^^

by **Hazel** Sat Jul 11, 2009 5:35 am

one

eh we weren't really that far. We've gotten farther. I don't really care too much unless we're really close Razz

by **Holleh** Sat Jul 11, 2009 5:44 am

Zero.

Hey, give my evilness some credit. ;~;

SO. For the romance novel, maybe some evil girl that is jealous of the main girl and tries to ruin it... Oh yes, something like that. BUT WITH A TWIST, NO DOUBT.
... And how to start it, I still need to figure out.

by **Hazel** Sat Jul 11, 2009 5:46 am

one

ok um! how's this.....you ruined the count! I am so devasted! You destroyed hours worth of counting that I will never be able to regain! Laughing

Oh yes, jealous people are always fun to have in a story yes! Razz

by **Holleh** Sat Jul 11, 2009 5:50 am

Zero.

Yes, I have hurt you in ways words cannot even begin to express! >)

Yes, definitely...
But going back to the 3rd person thing, should it be restricted 3rd person (or limited, whatever it's called) where I should only include one of the main characters' thoughts, or should it be where both of their thoughts can be read?
I'm leaning more towards the former, where it'll be mainly focused around the guy, but still in 3rd person, and his thoughts being the ones that can be read, but I'm still not sure.

by **Hazel** Sat Jul 11, 2009 5:53 am

one!

exactly!

it would be a little more oh how to put it, suspenseful maybe? if the reader could only see the girls thoughts through her actions. and it would seem a little more sponteanous and different, and perhaps the reader can be more surprised.

by **Holleh** Sat Jul 11, 2009 5:55 am

Zero.

True, true...
And I'll let the plotline unfold as I write, yes.
The hardest part of writing for me is the beginning.

I can think of the whole plot, the whole story, everything, and not know how to start it nicely.

by **Hazel** Sat Jul 11, 2009 5:57 am

one

haha really? usually for me it's the beginning and the end that are my favorite parts....but I seem to be having the same dilema with my story, the only problem is that even after I start the beginning I still don't know where to go with it......

usually it's during parts that aren't interesting to write but are majorly important are hard for me

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