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Post by Hazel Thu Feb 24, 2011 1:59 am

This one is a little all over the place. I was having organizational problems haha. I love stanza two <3 But not fond of the second to last one :/


And in case you couldn't guess (though I think you could Razz) it's Blood.





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Post by Holleh Thu Feb 24, 2011 2:01 am

At first I was like "...blue tubes?" but then I got it as I read further.
I like it. 8D
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Post by xStarr_x3 Thu Feb 24, 2011 2:12 am

Ohhh. I like the title. xD At first it made me think of that one Inkpop book getting published, The Carrier of the Mark.

It's good. c:
And I'm so glad you're doing the challenge with me. ^^
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Post by Hazel Thu Feb 24, 2011 2:21 am

Thanks Smile
Oh haha. I was going to title it The Angry Red Monster, but that seemed like a bit much so I didn't Razz
Yay! I'm so glad I'm doing the challenge too! I come home and like start right away. Makes my day XD (that's rhymed...I'm still in poem mode Razz)

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Post by xStarr_x3 Thu Feb 24, 2011 2:38 am

Ahaha, The Angry Red Monster. I love that. xD It sounds so cute and terrifying all at once.
..I can't rhyme to save a... mime.
SURE. That works. xP
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Post by Hazel Thu Feb 24, 2011 2:40 am

I love rhyming. Nearly all mine rhyme in some way. I don't know why but there's just something about the rhythm and rhyming words and I like to write XD
Though if I am going to write a poem about my feelings, normally it won't rhyme XD
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Post by Holleh Thu Feb 24, 2011 2:43 am

RHYME LIKE A MIME, STARREH.

I write in half free-verse and half-rhyming. Like... If I can rhyme, I'd rather do that than not rhyme, you know? But sometimes free-verse just works better.
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Post by Hazel Thu Feb 24, 2011 2:48 am

Yeah it sort of depends on the topic. I rhyme as often as I can but it's not the end of the world when i can't because I like free verse too. I'm sure when i get down to some of the harder topics I'll free verse them. I think rhyming can be harder but I like it XD
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