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The Love And Friendship Antisocial

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Post by Sofie Mon Apr 21, 2008 6:11 pm

I kinda like that name. It's self-explainatory, really.


The Love And Friendship Antisocial
by Seth Wreckage

Friendship is just another drug,
Another strong addicton.
Remove loneliness with a hug,
Replace it with restriction.

Love is just another prison,
Changing all your ways,
Blinding you from thought and reason,
Shortening your days.

The songs are pretty, that may be,
The stories rather sweet,
But I still hope that love and me
Will never, ever meet.





View it as a different angle! We all need variation in our lives. Try looking at it from this side a little. Scary? Perhaps.
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Post by BlackOpal Mon Apr 21, 2008 7:23 pm

Awesome. Very Happy
It is interesting to look at this from a different angle. Friendships are extremely selfish sometimes. People would rather have a friend listen to them than listen to a friend.
Great, as always.
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Post by Moonlite Knight Thu Apr 24, 2008 1:08 am

Wow, that was really interesting, I like it. I agree with BlackOpal. Great poem! Smile
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Post by Hazel Thu Apr 24, 2008 5:35 am

I never really thought about friendship that way, but in that light I suppose that can be very true! Smile
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Post by 017350 Fri May 09, 2008 5:06 pm

Yes, I like this one. It's the best of all your poems.
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Post by Sofie Sat May 10, 2008 2:45 pm

Thank you, guys!^^
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