The Night
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The Night
by 2bAgen. Sat Nov 08, 2008 5:21 pm
Through the maze of green,
With glittering jewels above,
The path is a twisted ribbon,
Fluttering gently in the breeze.
Following the hidden path,
Watching for the castle,
Twisted trees bar the way,
Others leading towards.
In the darkened sky,
The high building awaits
the leaving of the storm
stand strong it will.
Ok I just made this on the top of my head (not literally!) so it isn't that good.
With glittering jewels above,
The path is a twisted ribbon,
Fluttering gently in the breeze.
Following the hidden path,
Watching for the castle,
Twisted trees bar the way,
Others leading towards.
In the darkened sky,
The high building awaits
the leaving of the storm
stand strong it will.
Ok I just made this on the top of my head (not literally!) so it isn't that good.
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Re: The Night
by Moonlite Knight Sun Nov 23, 2008 4:05 am
Wrong, it's really good! I love the first stanza ^^ Great job!
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